Pop Star Selena Gomez Reveals Kidney Transplant | NBC Nightly News
In this story I liked how the reporter explained who Selena Gomez was, what Lupus was and how it effects other. I also enjoyed how the reporter got a professional experienced in the medical field to explain what Lupus and it makes it seem more reliable than if the reporter said it.
I think that if there was anything that should be improved is that maybe include a quote from a person that has Lupus to get there opinion on the disease. I think that this would only make the story stronger and it would help me know what it feels like to have Lupus.
For my future videos I will want to include multiple opinions in my stories to make my story stronger and I would want to continue to interview people that have a relation to the story or have professional experience in the story.